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  腾飞雅思助考[微电同号:18665365452]给大家分享雅思写作中小作文开头段应该怎么写,才能让考官对文章产生兴趣,更容易拿高分!首先肯定雅思小作文是比较套路化的,只需要paraphrase题目就可以了,但是同时必须切忌照抄!关于如何paraphrase,下面给同学们简单介绍一些基础的方法:

  近义词替换,这是比较基础的方法,也是要求最低的。一般必须也最好替换的是这几个词:表格形式、动词。

腾飞雅思助考介绍雅思写作之小作文开头段这样写容易拿高分!

  比如表格形式:用chart, graph, diagram, line graph之间熟练转化

  比如动词:原文是give information,换成 illustrate, shows…

  具体化或者概化,根据原文内容,灵活运用。比如原文是fish and some different kinds of meat,那么在改写的时候就可以具体化,写成, beef, lamb, chicken and fish。

  位置互换,这个对学生的能力要求比较高,原文是consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat,那么就该写成beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed。

  当然在具体的应用中,我们需要灵活的运用这些方法,下面腾飞雅思代考是举的几个简单的例子:

  题目: The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualification in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

  改写: The chart gives information about post-school qualifications in terms of the different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 1999.

  用gives information来代替show;post-school qualifications不变,把different levels后置,改成in terms of the different levels of further education,其中further education是新增的附加信息。

  题目: The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

  改写: The graph illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.

  用illustrate来代替show;用the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed来代替the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat,其中把consumption后置,并且细化some different kinds of meat,把它具体到详细的beef, lamb, chicken。

  题目: The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.

  改写: The charts show how much a UK school spent on different running costs in three separate years: 1981, 1991 and 2001.

  用spent on different running costs代替annual spending,同时替换了语序,由原来的annual spending by a particular UK换成了a UK school spent on different running costs。

  题目: The pie charts below shows units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.

  改写: The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the year 1980 and 2000.

  用sources of electricity来代替units of electricity production by fuel source。

  以上就是腾飞雅思替考[微电同号:18665365452]给大家分享的雅思写作之小作文开头段写作方法,希望能够给各位小烤鸭带来帮助。

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